A Room Full Of Darkness

by MaSkEdSoUl   Dec 15, 2005


In A Room Full Of Darkness,
Thoughts Running Through My Mind,
I Try To Cut, But Afraid,
Afraid Of The Pain,
but Nothings More Painful Than being Ignored.
Family, Friends, And Even God.
No Love From Anyone,
Isolated In A Room Of Darkness.
Afraid To Say Whats On My Mind,
Afraid Of What They'd Think,
Afraid If They'd Laugh.
Looking At My Reflection In The Mirror,
Brings Back All The Memories,
The Memories Of Pain,
Pain From Them Laughing And Talking About Me.
And I Just Sit There,
In a Room Full Of Darkness....Crying.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    ONE OF YOUR BEST POEMS;;; looovvee it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Good emotion! I felt you could have went a little deeper into this topic, however, since you covered such a broad subject. Kudos, though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This cool thing about this poem is that it almost reads like how I would imagine someone's thoughts to sound like. It was like I was in someone's head hearing their thoughts and feelings, whether intended or not that was a cool effect.

    "I Try To Cut, But Afraid,
    Afraid Of The Pain . ."

    This part, is it true? If it is be afraid of cutting, be terified, whatever it takes for you to not do it, not a road you want to do, I've been there and you don't want to go.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Sounds exactly like me... feel free to read some of my poems as well...

    great poem. excellent. 5/5! wonderful..

    hugs,
    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I too, in certain aspects can relate to this. but as ive learned, and you soon will as well, you are never alone. you sholdnt cry over things that arent happening. if you wnt somthing to happen, then make it happen. Rome wasnt built in a day!

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