Inhibited love

by David   Dec 24, 2005


If we have something special,
filled with hope and glory,
Our hearts hidden by our clothes,
through their eyes will tell the story,
Blinded by each other, we led our separate lives,
A glance, a wave, few words, we stayed- a blossoming friendship - already was made;

Different relationships along with friends,
our time for each other was brief but led;
The beginning and understanding,
of knowing each other,
the looks,the touches, the bonding like lovers-
Accepting denial,was hard to overcome, the sparks were set,
the race had begun;

Catching each other, or avoid being caught, breaking hearts in the process, a war being fought,
If bringing us together, was keeping us apart, then love being blind,destroyed us from the start

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Oh wow.. is the first thing that came to my mind after reading this poem of yours. You just blew me away. I know exactly what you're talking about here. No wonder mine made sense to you.I couldnt help but to read it over and over. Your last stanza was just outstanding and mindblowing.

    Thank you so much for your comment. Only then I got the chance to read such a brilliant poem like this which describes my life. Great job, keep up writing as you are a great writer.

    Best Wishes
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    I really liked this one. And I can so totally relate to it. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I liked the way you wrote the beginning. great job.
    take care,
    marjan