No One...

by MaSkEdSoUl   Dec 26, 2005


No One Cares,
No One Bothers,
No One Even Knows I'm Alive.
No One Asks Me "Whats Wrong?",
No One Knows How I Feel,
No One Loves Me,
No One Wants Me,
I'm Only A Ghost,
Only Some Sad Girl,
Only A Worthless Being Stuck In A Life Thats Unwanted...

*This was written when I was younger...so yea thats all I have to say*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This poem also could go somewhere if you would want to revise it now that you have learned how to write better. You have a good feeling here, a good foundation that could be buit on if you wanted to.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    "Only A Worthless Being Stuck In A Life Thats Unwanted" that line says so much in such a concise and expressive way.

    i think this peice it good, it says a lot

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CANVAS

    I FEEL LIKE THIS POEM WAS ALL ABOUT ME, SO I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME KNOW I AM NOT ALONE.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mimi112

    "all of us are something but none of us are everything". you are something and u should be more confident in order to show ppl that !! u put urself down and if u dont believe in urself, noone will !! so stand up tall and smile.. and ppl r going to smile back at u !

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