by Bill Turner Dec 28, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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Black is the night creeping eternal |
by MariiaShan
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Yo man nice verse I can relate to this poem as many poeple have said but U have to put into words for all to hear there are things in the night that creep out and torment you others come out during day but you can fight them off but duirng the night it's like I'm going to die tonight.... |
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Sowwy, I'm just weird sometimes (well, lets be honest, most of the time) lol Hugs and always take care Bill! |
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8-( I don't know....I love the writing and everything, but it's just dark/sad. Your poem are always so touching and I'm just speechless with this one...You know....never mind...take care and smile, I want to feel the happiness that your smile brings to our world. |
by Melissa
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Oh wow, so sad! I really relate to this, great job! Beautifully written! |
by Simon Hayes
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Very dark Bill... Well written my friend :) |