I look deep into your eyes

by Once an Angel   Dec 28, 2005


Torn Apart: Hey baby this poem is for you, an reply to your other poem call what do you see or something like that. Hope you like it!

I Look deep into your eyes,
and I see years of trying,
To keep living your life,
Years of fighting the dying.

I Look deep into your eyes,
and I can see all the pain.
So I hold you close, let you cry,
Being the friend to keep you sane.

I Look deep into your eyes,
and I see you burdened down with lies.
So I am standing here waiting for you
To finally shed your painful disguise.

I Look deep into your eyes,
And I see your desperate plea.
So tell me of your suicide thoughts,
And why you no longer what to be.

I Look deep into your eyes,
and I see you feel utter emptiness.
Give me a chance to fill you up
A change to restore your happiness.

Look deep into my eyes,
I see all the secrets hide.
So let me be here for you baby
and all the pain you can confide.

I Look deep into your eyes,
I baby I see so much light
Of a person who is still needed by this world
And shouldn't yet give up her difficult fight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great poem. liked your wording! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I really liked this poem....Not only was it well written and flow nicely but I thought it was very sweet as well....You have a real talent...Great job...and thsnks for the comment it ment alot =)

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    I really like the way you wrote this poem. How each stanza starts with "I look deep into your eyes" (except the second to last stanza). It's like it's pressing it into the readers minds.

    Good job.

    Tony

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I like this poem a lot. It reminds me of a friend of mine and a struggle shes going through. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Dominique

    Wow, that was absolutly amazing, you truly have alot of talant. and don't worry i forgive you...i never was really mad at you to begin with, anywho it's all good. as for the poem..idk i have my days when i feel like that, but not as much anymore, but if i ever need help..ill know i can rely on you..so thanks =]

    -dominique