Break Down

by xXMyThanatosXx   Jan 5, 2006


Break down

I love myself
That is why I cut myself
I break down
Try to gather all the pieces
When I break down
Try to smile, not to mourn
When I break down
Its ok, I'm not ok
When I break down
I love myself
That is why I cut myself
That is why I drown myself
That is why I hate myself
I break down

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Actually I'm in quite a good mood, I wanted to write a poem that is based off of the teenage persona...."I hate myself, because I hate myself"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Very creative poem, I understand what you were trying to get at. Like you, my poetry is based on the creative mind. I wanted to write about how girls think their life revolves around one guy, and if he were to go, their life would be over. Anyways, I don't know who rated your poem a 3, but they just don't understand poetry. Take care man, and keep writing.

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