Love On A Thin Thread

by Monique   Jan 7, 2006


You and me
Seemed like we were meant to be

One night you crept away
Though I wish you would stay

I am crossed
Because in this cruel game of love I have lost

I want to fall asleep in your arms
Rise above the stars

I'm in heaven with you
But now we are two

I drift away in a never-ending sleep
I've fallen so deep

Everything stops in track
I begin to crack

The days are longer
The nights are colder

You are no longer by my side
Thought you were mine till' the end of the ride

I was mislead
Now I'm hanging by a thread

Snap, and down I go
Plunging into the deep ocean below . . . .

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kate

    Hey, i love the ending of this one, but the whole thing was great as well!

    Keep it up (hehe)

    Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hi There!!

    i wonder y this hasn't been voted yet.
    U r new & in the begin.. same thing hpnd with me too..out of frustrations i wrote "Rate Me" and that somehow clicked...whosoever commented on mine got the same result from me..& the growth started slowly. thats my secret..hope it helps u 2.

    poems like this do deserve much more appreciation...but give some more time & dont loose hope.

    take care

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