Soul Ripper

by Lady Vengeance   Jan 10, 2006


Please tell me you're okay
Because i know that somethings wrong
I don't know you like i used to
I feel I've been away too long

Say that you'll be fine
and say it like it's true
Those were never tears of happiness
Because your smiles are just so few

prove you'll be alright
By not shedding a tear
I'll help you if you tell me
Your feelings are unclear

Show me you can smile
And mean it from the heart
But do not let me in
Because I'll tear you apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Thta ending is so chilling. a brillient poem

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Very good. The ending was well done as a surprise. Interesting word choice.
    ~Unforgiven

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wonderful poem. The end was so surprising! I didn't expect that at all! Very well done, I truly loved this poem, especially the end. Love ya -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    OMG!!!!! WHOS THIS OTHER GUY!!!!!!!
    lol, stop reading my diary....he he he

    Mattyo

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