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You are a talented writter.. i like your poems..nice job once again. 5/5

thanks for sharing
shannon

Hiya,

Feels exactly like how I feel..
Great poem, great read.

Cheers,
Laterz,
Shirlz.
♥

Don't break my heart stay and keep me warm

I think it just runs a bit long. It's an okay poem for expressing how you feel, sure, but I think if you wanted more of a feeling go more in depth with the details. You don't have to. Just want to try helping :)

Way to go.. express yourself... but bby all means.. don't let him know he got you enslaved by his character..

I hope my comments do not offend your nor your friend..

Use what you got to get what you need... work that pencil and paper with your thoughts of your experiences.

love who you are, this helps in the hard times. be the center of attractions, just enough to avoid be selfishness. Enjoy life,live and learn...

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!