Pain!

by Katrina Boblina   Jan 14, 2006


Pain! breaking the barrier
between tolerable and not
crimson red staining my soul
my blood feeling hot.

holding my breath,
my last? I don't know
singing sweet songs
of dark angels bellow.

I'm crippled and tired
and smothered with fear
my new home, hell,
is drawing so near.

Just another lonely teen
hating her sad life
tightly holding
the now crimson knife.

Silently yelling
about all the pain
feeling so stupid
and feeling so vain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    I like this peom alot...even though ya did leave us hanging at the end...
    5/5

    ~Bloodscars~

  • 18 years ago

    by Marie

    LOVE IT! It goes great together... you choose awsome words to fit.. You just did a great job!!! Keep it up

    Marie

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Great write and great flow.
    "holding my breath,
    my last? I don't know"
    Those were cool lines and just stood out to me.
    ~The Unforgiven

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked this poem a lot.This was written very well. I think that it says a lot. You are very talented. *5/5*

    Check out some of mine if you want.