Thoughts in the night - second edition

As cold air dominates the night,
freezes the thoughts of warmth within me.
Pondering of this, I feel,
\"Is it merely what I perceive, but ne\'er real?\"
The wind starts rattling and blowing,
yet in me, still, calmness.
Resisting the subtle urge,
to express feelings inappropriate, with boldness.
Suddenly, leaves are falling,
my heartbeat starts rising.
Probably, \'tis a fault comprehending
some things first, without realizing.
Subsequently, there, comes the snow;
branches left alone and \'tis white around.
Then, I decided to set-aside the feelings,
Until I hear my heart\'s genuine sound.
Surprised I am now to have heard a sweet singing sound.
Humming don\'t set aside the feelings
or in regrets your life be forever bound.
Considering my lovely heart\'s voice,
I had but a choice.
I gave in to the most subtle urge,
and Lo! fear of boldness purged.
I pondered,\"Truly \'tis real, though not perceived...\"
I was then eased, and warmth received.

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I revised my own poem a bit.. \'coz I had to lengthen it and submit it to a certain contest.....pls. rate... which is much better? the other one or this? comment?