When Does it End?

by eternitySOlong   Jan 14, 2006


One more slit
Just to feel the pain
One more gash
I'm done playing the games

The dotted line
My secret serenity
Drain out the vains
Leaving them empty

My lips turn icy blue
My skin turns pale white
Suddenly stop breathing
Just give up the fight

I'm not hurting anymore
I'll never again have to cry
The curtain slowly closes
It all ends when I finally die

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amythyst

    Short & sweet, i love that poem, very good, very relatable...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Amazing...I love this poem. It's so very depressing. And you know that if you're feeling like this you can talk to me about it. !! and thank you...I know you are there for me : ) I'll talk to you about it in an email. Greta poem once again doll, always amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    The dotted line
    My secret serenity
    Drain out the vains
    Leaving them empty

    Loved that bit, such a sad poem about giving up, well written though, 5/5

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