Look At What I've Become...

by Spitfire   Jan 15, 2006


Don't you understand !!
its not about you anymore
cant it be about me for once?
cant i not be perfect?
cant i have a problem
cant i have a shoulder to cry on
sometime?
cant i be someone besides what
you want?
why cant i have a problem
why do i always have to have a smile ?
sometimes i cant live the way everyone think i can
sometimes i cant be EvErYtHiNg
everyone wants from me
I'm ready to give up
I'm ready to tell someone i need help too
someone help me
someone take me in
and look at at what i've become
someone ..
tell me you care
tell me you know what I'm going through
tell me i CAN get through it
Someone Just help me

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I feel like that alot, thanks so much for taking time to read my poem
    if u ever wanna talk feel free to msg me but yea awsome write, u put alot of feeling into it

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey wow i love that one. Its very true. And very,very deep.

    THanks for liking my works. I really like yours to. I check it first whenever im on here. Im sorry if i havent been writing. But im putting a few up tonight. So tell me what you think? Once again, amazing work.
    5/5

  • OH hun, I feel you, completely. But, you CAN get throught this. you can, I can, we all can. Cuz hun, there gotta be more than this. There gotta be more to these lives of ours. This couldnt be it. Maybe we shall all runaway together. Or maybe, I'm just a dreamer. Maybe we're all just dreamers.

    Stay Strong hun, rmb that youre not alone

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    Hey great poem loved it 5/5 thanks for commenting mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow sweety...i feel for u here...hey dont worry you still got the anynomouse me...:)

    *^*crow*^*