Now she's dead, now she's gone

by coupon can   Jan 16, 2006


She's writing another I miss you letter
You're leaving another unanswered heart
You're shattering her unbreakable heart
You're mistaking her unmistakable cries

She's putting her heart out there
And she's taking in it back within a second
Life's too cruel for her silly heart
Your too real for her fairytale life

She's giving you her heart
You're laughing at her fairytale life
She's crying, she's taking the knife
Don't you understand? She's just a kid.

The knife in her hand
You're cutting up her heart
She's cutting up her life
She's bleeding, her nightmare is gone

You look at her with your cold eyes
You don't say a thing
You don't give a fu.ck
She gave her life for you

So tell me, was it worth it?
Now she's dead, Now she's gone
Are you happy now?
You were everything to her

She can't write you another I miss you letter
You can't break her heart anymore
She can't feel any pain now
Now she's dead, now she's gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I think this is excellent! eventhough you don't rhyme ypou have a very nice flow...

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    MPHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    This is definately (i dunno if that's the correct way of spelling it..lol who cares) one of my favorite poems from u, i like specially the beggining, i dunno the first part simply captivates me:

    "She's writing another I miss you letter
    You're leaving another unanswered heart
    You're shattering her unbreakable heart
    You're mistaking her unmistakable cries "

    ..You're mistaking her unmistakable cries.. awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    bai bai

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    This is a exteamly good poem,, loved the 3rd stanza,, tnx for ur comment and votes,,
    lots of lovin
    **doz an1c me**

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job i can feel the pain in the poem it's very deep keep up the good work 5.5