Dreaming

by ~*Nicki*~   Jan 20, 2006


Dreaming of...
those eyes, your smile and touch
not able to clutch the feeling
the horrible feeling your gone

Away I drift further...
in my thoughts I'm lost
I never thought I'd lose you
at least not this way

We were not exactly talking
to your ending day
but i look at it this way
things happen for a reason

All i ask is why...
I'm never going to get
18 you only were
you still had much life to hit

I now fear guns
suicide and blood
to that we all lost
something we all truly loved

You may have never thought
you may have never dreamed
how much everyone cared
or would ever have dared

~For you only for you~

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  • 17 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    Aww, if this really happened, im so sorry :( great poem though

  • 17 years ago

    by Daddi Vu

    Thx for your comments,
    I also read your poems and their are very good.
    I like them very much, so keep on writing.
    Dat

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is really beautiful, really liked ur poem.
    great work indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This is a breathtaking poem. I loved it. Especially your last stanza... it was just brilliant. You're a great writer, keep writing. I'd love to visit you soon and read some more of your great work.

    Thankyou for your sweet comments. Keep on visiting me, I'm sure I wont disappoint you. :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey sweety, Wonderul written, very powerful.

    I'm sorry hun, I'm afraid I can relate to this very well. I guess I lost someone this way aswell. Though it's been two years ago, I still feel the pain whenever I think about it, as if it was just yesterday.

    I'm proud of you, proud that you wrote a poem like this, with so many emotions and feelings in it, cause I realise it's hard to write about it.

    Very well done, also thank you so much for you comment, you should know it means a lot to me.

    Lotsaa love -xxx-