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by Angie Jan 25, 2006
Sadness, depression /
Sadness swells and fills my heart,
It hurts so much, it tares me apart.
I smile and laugh to cover up my pain,
But sometimes it's to much and these tears I cannot contain.
Inside I'm torn,
Feelings run wild.
Gashing wounds so deep,
Leaving scars for me to keep.
Why do I feel this way?
So lost and confused.
When will it go away?
Hopefully before my heart brakes in two.
Â© Angie K 2006
**Another poem, hope you all enjoyed it. Please comment and rate to tell me what you think. Thank you! xoxo
I think brake's should be breaks. but same thing people will still get the beautiful picture you have written here. Great and Amazing poem! 5/5
by Jenni Marie
Another one that i really enjoyed. And another 5/5
I think so far this is my favorite poem of yours.. out of the last 3.. another great poem.. i really thought the last line put a good effect on it.. even thought the rhyming scheme switched it still flowed nicely great job 5/5
I didn't enjoy it...I felt it....
Power esp. at a time when I feel so vulnerable and confused.
[lostlaureate - come find me]
by ~~Lindsay Woods~~
Full of emotion...but very well written!..5/5!