You saved me that night...

by PassionatelyMarla   Jan 27, 2006


One night not long ago, i looked how my life went to a all time low...

it was raining deep inside of me, my tears making my car go all flow...

i wanted to get away, i thought there was nothing left to say...

so i went to the bridge at the deep of night the one i had stood by at that dreadful sight...

i got in my red-blue-ish car and decided that the pain will end in that way...

so i pumped up the gas, and said my prayr last, as i decided to give this thing a Chance...

the star\'s gazing lights was all that i could see, before this person swerved in front of me...

i tried to grab the brake i tried to steer clear, but for you it was all ready too late...

your head was bleeding open, your eyes dreaded blue, but the thing im most glad for is that im alive like you...

that night was bad as i layed there till 9 minutes past 8, doing nothing but smiling mad...

the doctors say your in a comma, for how long no one knows...

but no matter how deep or what date, by your bedside i will be of late...

to look in the man\'s eyes, to thank him for walking by...

i now know all that i could be, bcoz of all that i had to see...

but one thing is still a mystery, the thing that bugs me at night...

i saw your tears on the red stained towel, at the dead of that night...

why were you there, if not to save me, why were you there but to save me...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Will

    I liked every bit of the poem and it is very very good its better than mine 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ness

    Aww wow, that sent tears to my eyes, it was so beautiful. I really loved it especially the last part.

    ness xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    This is a very sweet poem. and i really support the main question of your poem. i personally think every one is born to save some one and everyone will die to save some one, well i think ur poem is awesome and yet very sad

    keep it up

    Take Care

    LoTA LoVen,,

    T!FF@N!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    Full of despare and wonderful ?'s for love always makes people do crazy things. keep up ur beautiful talent

    -faithfulserneity

  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Wow that's emotional! I loved it though..it almost made me cry. keep writing! 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~