Really good i love it

love always
tabby

God this poem is amazing. And unfortunately I know the feeling, I wear a disguise so that they do not know and they will hopefully never know. Great poem. 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Thia Is Such A Gr8 Poem! Il Luved It A Lot! When I Was Reading It I Thought Of A Friend Of Mine Who Wears Fake Smiles And Says (I'm Fine) But I Saw Through That...
5/5

Amasing! lol i love it, its so well said...great job!-xxx-

I loved your poem I gave it a 5. I really relate to it. You seem to have alot it common with me at least in poetry wise. Keep on writting and if you ever need some one to talk to you can always e-mail me.

This poem is just wonderful. i cant explain it. i have felt like that and you hit every emotion and every pain. nice job.
Emma 5/5

This is real good and so true...ppl hide behind themselves....i used to do it all the time, if u ever need to talk i'm always here for u, love ya-hugs-hayley

I love you poem it show what it is true to feel and that most well me and you feel. that people dont try to see the reale us. they just over look it and say to themselves there is nothing worng that if they keep on beliving that then notihing is woring with them.

This poem is great too i really like it. i just relate to it. keep it up your doing a good job. also u have a good rhyme to them.

Its a gr8 one ;)
hope u're okay

The line she cry her black mascara tears doesnt sound right shouldnt it be she cries her black mascara tears. Your 4th stanza doesnt rhyme. Its a very sad poem very depressing.

Hey babe, So sad hun I don't quite know what to say. I wish I could just take all the hurt away from you and make everything alright! I luv u so much and don't want anything bad to happen to you so you stay strong for me yeh? We'll get through it together :) Luv Amanda xxxx

I loved this poem I gave it a 5. I like your style and the flow of this poem was great. If you get a chance can you check out one of my poems.

Great write... I loved it.. I gave it a 5...

Very nice flow to it and it really exspresses the pain your feeling!! 5/5

I think deep down we are all hiding a part of ourselves, and for some it's more then others! i really liked your poem, you did a great job with expressing your emotions and telling a story! well done!
luv em

Oh wow....this poem gave me chills...breath-taking!!!

I have a dream. In my dream, people like us will finally feel excepted, be releived of our pain and will reframe from hurting ourselves. Just remember that after night comes day and after rain comes shine. If you dont find peace nowhere else, I hope that one day you'll find a peace of mind.

Youre an ahmazing writer!
Ive read almost all of yours so far, and I jus cant stop.