by Emma Feb 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Blood |
by MaSkEdSoUl
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I like this poem. You can feel the emotion in the poem. Good job! |
by Cassandra
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Very good poem and its very ture, many say that the first love never last thats its just something to learn from....5/5 |
by Daze
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Great poem, it has true feelings of how it feels to oose a love, greatly written, i loved it. |
by Katie
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Very sweet recalling the innocence of first love. very well written, and so true... |
by Megadrive
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I liked it=) It was kinda in a strange beat but other then that very good. Good emotion=) nice job! |