First Love

by Emma   Feb 2, 2006


Blood
Tears
Pain
What is left of our first love?
Was it only lies?
Memories
Destruction
Cries
The last
Kiss, a sweet moment of
Bliss.
This love of a cold heart
That we always will share
The first love, beautiful
Amazing!
Wonderful!
But beware
Because it leaves
only
broken hearts
And causes shattered souls
and leaves
you feeling battered
and abused.

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Thanks
Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I like this poem. You can feel the emotion in the poem. Good job!

    --*NaydeeN*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Very good poem and its very ture, many say that the first love never last thats its just something to learn from....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Great poem, it has true feelings of how it feels to oose a love, greatly written, i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Very sweet recalling the innocence of first love. very well written, and so true...

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I liked it=) It was kinda in a strange beat but other then that very good. Good emotion=) nice job!

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