by LadyPearl Feb 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Like the fire, you sear my skin |
by Jessica
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Awww..dont worry hun, keep your chin up! this was a very sad poem, there was a lot of emotion oozing out! great job! 5/5 |
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Great piece.I can really feel the pain, sadness, despair all fading into an emptiness.The rhyme scheme is a bit off in a couple spots, but regardless this still has a good flow to it and what is overpowering is the way you convey the emotions by how you say it.Fantastic job.A very touching piece. |