I Stand Here All Alone

by ~~Lindsay Woods~~   Feb 2, 2006


I stand here all alone as my friends watch me,
I look ahead and there i see,
a home that is not yet to be,

I stand here all alone,
Waiting on someone,
To show me where the light is hidden,
I look all around but i feel so forbidden.

I stand here all alone,
no one beside me,
trying to be some one that i am not,
I need some one to love and to care,
Is there some one who can hold me?

I stand here all alone,
Looking at the sun go down,
But who wants to love a girl in a pale white gown?

My friends just look and wait till the time is right.
For when it turns to night,
I still look for the one thing i need in life...
Light.

~~~ This was a quick write i did at school...not the best...but thought that i might put it on here!~~~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Great work...loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe how sad. good tho.

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nice write. Short and sweet. If I may suggest, move the "as my friends watch me," to a new line so that it makes more overall impact on the poem, stressing that you're "Standing here all alone"... also, if you move "in a pale white gown?" to a new line, it'll keep the flow going and be more consistent throughout the poem. Just my thoughts. Great write though! Keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    KEw Kew ... one of ur best definitly

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Excellent poem!!!

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