Never Letting Go

by Mezmeryz   Feb 12, 2006


You're an angel sent from above
We met not very long ago
I lay upon you this promise of love
Always being there, never letting go

Your friendship so sweet like you
Forever you show unlimited care
You'll be my best mate life through
I too wont let you shed a tear

But thats only if I could help it
Because you're not so near, but far
Still you're in my heart, the core bit
And out in the sky, youre a star

You know when Im feeling low
And you always make me smile
Its you my lil angel, get my flow
Even in innocence you've got style

When you're truthful I feel pleased
To know an angel, honest like you
Knowing you, my problems are eased
I know who I get my advice through

Youre so unique, so simply you
And thats what makes you special
No matter what fate brings us to
You'll always remain that individual

Who helps me when I need a friend
Stands by my side without being around
No matter what, you seize the trend
And have all my troubles unbound

You're an angel sent from above
We met not very long ago
I lay upon you this promise of
Always being there, never letting go

(*[This poem is dedicated to Sazu aka Sazeeda...my best mate...Luv Ya Hunny!!]*)

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow such a great job so sweet i like this

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Once again another wonderful poem! You flow and rhythm were really well done! You used really good vocabulary and nothin seemed forced. I really liked the lines:

    "You know when Im feeling low
    And you always make me smile
    Its you my lil angel, get my flow
    Even in innocence youve got style"

    It was so deep and meanignful. Well said.

    The only thing that i found you could fix is, you forgot appostrifies. Such as the words you're...your put youre, just add the appostrifies and its all good. =D

    Ne ways never stop writing! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Hey hny!
    wow its gr8 kasam n u mde me sound lyk sm1 els lolz bt hey i dnt mind bein an agel lol nali seriously its a gr8 poem tnx n u no wt yr a gr8 m8 n im hu i am cos of u i wdnt b ere 2day if u hdnt been der fr me al da tyms iv needed sm1 i lve u loads
    xmwahx

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Aww that was sooo good i loved it nice job!!

    thanks for sharing
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    I really love this one!