Do you Love me?

by David Marshall   Feb 13, 2006


I love you,
Why can't it be just us two,
Without you my life is through,
Every day my love for you grew,
I care so much, you have no clue,
No matter what our lives will pursue,
We sometimes say things that are untrue.

My love for you will never be surpassed,
For my love for you is way too vast,
and my love for you will always last,
Theres been sorrow but I'll forget the past,
Please understand, because this life is too fast.

Do you think we could ever be?
Only you can set me free,
I need to know before this world I flee,
I love you,
But do you love me?

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  • 17 years ago

    by *~H3LL Iz 3MPTY @LL TH3 D3VIL$ @R3 H3R3~*

    Omg the rhyming is annoyin
    u try 2 make it sound oo sooo alike

    a good poem shows emotion u kw
    its kinda crazy
    comes from the heart
    not from the mind

  • 18 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    You're right.I do like your poems they are very well writen .........and you're onl 15? wow......you're very good keep it up! *MUAH*

    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by tabitha

    I really like this poem. it relates to me a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awww...sweet poem... well expressed. Excellent work! :o)

    Hugs,

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Coleman

    Killer poem. Loved the rhyming, sometimes great to see someone try some other kind of rhyme scheme. Cant wait to see some more poems from you. If you could could check out one of my poems man?

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