My New Poem!

by MrPessimist   Feb 18, 2006


I gave up, I did, I was through with poems.

But there was something empty inside me when I sat home alone.

With my new friend, job, and hobby all gone.

I decided to revisit a website about poems.

As I checked it, I had several comments that I read with a moan.

so now I'm back to the only place that feels like home.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I like the way you put your thoughts into poems but you really need to find some creative names for them. I hope you continue improving and such.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I liked this, it explains alot.
    But seriously, chose more creative names.
    It will get you much more readers, and your poems are interesting.
    Also, next poem try give it more meaning..I am looking forard to reading more of your work, watching you grow as a writer =-D

    Lisa.x

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    Hooray!! :D

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