My First Haiku

Yay! very nice. (the syllables are fine)
~Sami

Your Haiku was intristing. Remember that the syllables are 5,7,5. The first line was, second was eight or nine, then the last one was okay. (sorry if I got on your nerves in any way..) The Haiku was really great though.

This has alot of thought behind it.
I tthink if you put more catchy titles on your poems, they would be looked at more, and considered better.
Good poem..really makes you think to understand.

Lisa.x