Blue eyes

by SammiBABY   Feb 19, 2006


With dignity I was entranced by eyes of blue,
Vulnerable, I thought you were a saviour in the dark
Beauty seen and held so delicately
I sensed purity
I felt a spark.

Looking for nothing but finding you and your eyes
In the sunlight, in the rain,
They sparkled like the stars in the sky
Confused but truly fascinated
I let go of pain.

It was more, devoured in your tranquillity
I felt a cure to each lonely night
The colour, consumed all thought,
Violated all reason
And nothing was ever right

Only those eyes were glamorous,
Deceitfully they showed perfection,
And you shun beauty only when needed
Otherwise nothing
I fell to obsession.

I was meaningless to you,
As soon as you could, you forgot,
Forgot that I gave you my time
When I thought you were real,
But you are not.

Those eyes, that colour remains
In the darkness it is all I see
Rare blue; precious blue
Endearing and honest
Like you will never be.

Blue eyes,
Torturous eyes.

17th February 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Tlkin bout eyes.i like the colour of urs..lol..its tru.....lovely poem huni...yet again 5/5......ur a very talented girl sammi n an amazing friend too.

    nami
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    So perfect, Sammi, so perfect!!!!!!! I think I'll post this poem on my wall. It reminds me of a guy I used to like in high school. He, coincidentally, has blue eyes. This poem is so wonderful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really nice and original. I liked the rhyming scheme you chose it fitted nicely. I got the impression you were sorta telling us a story throughout this, whatever the intention is, it works very well. Nice job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Oh sammi baby i love this poem its fantasic flows nicely and ur use of words are fab great work honestly hun well done xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    This is a gorguz poem, it is really good, i really like this poem...=) luv ya Courtney xoxoxo