Completing the Circle

by myxlittlexcut   Feb 19, 2006


Completing the Circle

we all know each other's thoughts
death is on our mind
everyone is searching for answers
but there are none to find

we are all scared inside
our conscious a mere ghost
no more happiness or fun
being loved is what i miss most

i still can't believe
that we're all still breathing
every word we say
becomes more and more deceiving

stuck in the middle
can't go up or down
i pray for help
as the world spins around and round

then all is forgotten
so why am i still crying
because it's too late
my soul has finished dieing

nothing is left
everything was thrown away
only scars remind me
that i had lived one more day

we all fell
on by one
till the circle of life and death
was finally done

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  • 19 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Hey thanks for the suggestion, i will check it out!

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow well i already commented but wow.
    that poem just blew me away again.
    This is the only thing that made the poem harder to read:
    "but none are there to find"-maybe but there are none to find..
    i thought the flow was easier.
    Anyway..amaizng poem..great writing keep it up xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oh my gosh WOW!!! that is such an amazing poem, i absolutely loved it! brilliant writing hun :),
    take care,
    lots of luv xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem! wow hun..
    speahless xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Valentin

    I now understand more y ur poems get published, they're incredibly awesome

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