Comments : Life

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    There is a loud & clear message here and i get it completely, u just wrote some bitter facts of life with grace and i heartly appreciate u for that.

    great poem indeed

    Life is full of love
    So why do you seek for hate
    Let me show you what love is all about
    And you will again trust in fate

    i am ready (Khullam Khulla)

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ali

    Wow such a lovely poem!! you have really epitomised love for life :-) Truly awesome, your poems are always great with a lovely message of love!

    This poem is so riveting yet encouraging as well! 5/5 for this one!
    Thanks for commenting on mine !!!

    Hope to read more soon, take care!

    Love
    Ali

  • 15 years ago

    by maya

    Your message is so clear i think every body will notice would you said i love it...thanks for the comment
    ~*maya~*

  • 15 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Amazing poem, with a clear and concise message. I love it! I'm stunned! Pure perfection.

  • 15 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great one this! very meaningful. I love the last line especially -
    You will learn to love life
    At your final breath

    thanks very much for your comments on my work.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    Its a really nice poem...it makes you think about how you're living your life and what you should do to live it to its fullest....

  • 15 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Hey there. this was a great poem. I agree with everything you've said. Somethings are just to great. It's to bad some people don't really realize it until its gone. Loved it, really.

    thanks for reading my most recent one. It must have strained your eyes since it was so long...

    -han

    I really love your poems

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely penned, Great job!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by purva bhatia

    Life is so precious
    Then why do you love death
    You will learn to love life
    At your final breath.......

    lovely poem. there cannot be any better thing than motivating people. this is what i could think of after reading your wonderful poem.....

    before death conquers life
    and there is still some time
    the best you can get up and do
    is to love life and let life love you!

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Well i can see that all your poems are meaningful and touching.I feel comforted as reading them.Thx a lot

    Just Wishes

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great write, Michelle. i really enjoy reading your work. so much from the heart.

    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is an excellent poem with fantastic diction and accurate imagery as well as a natural flow. Well done on an excellent poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Torn

    Such an inspirational poem hun! omg i loved this. It's funny how simple words put together along with meaning and passion can result in a masterpeice like this and actually encourage me to take all of your great advice.
    Great poem, you are very wise.
    Much love
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Wow wut a sweet life it will be with such a poem

  • 14 years ago

    by RiViTeD

    Wonderful ending! This is quite true in some cases. great writing style. keep the words rollin, your doin great :D