There is a loud & clear message here and i get it completely, u just wrote some bitter facts of life with grace and i heartly appreciate u for that.

great poem indeed

Life is full of love
So why do you seek for hate
Let me show you what love is all about
And you will again trust in fate

i am ready (Khullam Khulla)

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow such a lovely poem!! you have really epitomised love for life :-) Truly awesome, your poems are always great with a lovely message of love!

This poem is so riveting yet encouraging as well! 5/5 for this one!
Thanks for commenting on mine !!!

Hope to read more soon, take care!

Love
Ali

Your message is so clear i think every body will notice would you said i love it...thanks for the comment
~*maya~*

Amazing poem, with a clear and concise message. I love it! I'm stunned! Pure perfection.

Great one this! very meaningful. I love the last line especially -
You will learn to love life
At your final breath

thanks very much for your comments on my work.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Its a really nice poem...it makes you think about how you're living your life and what you should do to live it to its fullest....

Hey there. this was a great poem. I agree with everything you've said. Somethings are just to great. It's to bad some people don't really realize it until its gone. Loved it, really.

thanks for reading my most recent one. It must have strained your eyes since it was so long...

-han

I really love your poems

Very nicely penned, Great job!!!

Life is so precious
Then why do you love death
You will learn to love life
At your final breath.......

lovely poem. there cannot be any better thing than motivating people. this is what i could think of after reading your wonderful poem.....

before death conquers life
and there is still some time
the best you can get up and do
is to love life and let life love you!

Well i can see that all your poems are meaningful and touching.I feel comforted as reading them.Thx a lot

Just Wishes

Great write, Michelle. i really enjoy reading your work. so much from the heart.

shobhana

This is an excellent poem with fantastic diction and accurate imagery as well as a natural flow. Well done on an excellent poem!

Such an inspirational poem hun! omg i loved this. It's funny how simple words put together along with meaning and passion can result in a masterpeice like this and actually encourage me to take all of your great advice.
Great poem, you are very wise.
Much love
>torn -x.x.x-

Wow wut a sweet life it will be with such a poem

Wonderful ending! This is quite true in some cases. great writing style. keep the words rollin, your doin great :D