Happy Times

by Lauren   Feb 20, 2006


Looking out my window,
thoughts run through my mind.
I'm thinking back to a happy time,
when i was yours and you were mine.
we were sitting on your couch,
without a care in the world.
nothing could come between us
we were so in love.
you were my world,
my everything.
you were my best friend,
my lover.
but you had to take it all away from me.
the one thing that i had
is gone now.

where did it all go wrong?
was it my fault?
could i have saved us?

...i still love you...

* just thinkin 'bout me and my ex. things randomly popped in my head as i was writing. i want to ask him questions, but i just cant talk to him.
if you have the time please comment. I'll do the same for you. thanx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Hey i like your poems, this is the second one i read, i'll try to read them all. And thanks for commenting my poem (hello stranger) it means a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    I liked the flow of this... consider one little thing... take out "at that moment". Great write though... keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by one.love

    O man.
    i know EXACTLY how u feel.
    u wanna know where it went wrong,
    you'd do anything to fix it.
    or even just to understand it.

    great poem, though.
    keep it up && stay strong.
    here if u wanna talk....

  • 18 years ago

    by Kevin

    Its good i like it i gave it a 5 very good

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hi
    im an angel
    i read ur quotes
    i think i understand wats goin on
    this guy broke up with u rite...for a damn slu+...
    and you say he loved u...and you say u did too...
    heres my say
    you mightve
    but he never did
    cos if he did he wudnt ever hav done that
    and YOU DO NOT UNDER ANY BLUDDY CIRCUMSTANCE deserve wat he did to you.
    and that quote abt him callin u beautiful and holding hands in front of frnds....its probably an article he read in some book or website....how to make girls feel loved...or...how do you know tht a guy loves u....and he applied it.
    damn smartass.
    forget him, babe
    youre way better
    i know its super hard...and youre prolly contradicting every statement ive said in ur head...but WHAT ARE U GONNA DO THINKIN BOUT HIM? youre gonna forget him sometime or the other rite? so why not now...tht much less pain...
    crank up some music
    call some friends over...
    have fun
    b|tch abt him
    and if u get a chance...apply this infamous quote

    he broke my heart...so i broke his jaw ;)
    take care
    dhaval
    (maybe we can be friends...leave a comment on my poems to tell me abt all this stuff n the poems maybe lol thanks cya)

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