If For One Night

Nitin
This is breath takingly beautiful. How your love you have in your heart shines here. I wish you had found this love.

just one more wish if he could hear
if i could stay one night with you
and watch you sleep my dear

if i could keep my palm under your head
caress you hair all night long
and make you sleep on my dream bed

I was so touched by these two stanzas they moved me to tears.. I wish...Oh how I wish...to have just one more night with my love.....I miss him so much.
Excellent job yaar.
Love Cindy

This was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read in my life. Keep up the good work.
god bless
Renee

In this life which was so full of chaos
you came tearing all clouds apart
and made me forget who i really was

fantastic word use....i really enjoyed reading this....5/5......its just so beautiful......hope all ur wishes do come true.

takecare
sonam

You have a uniqueness about your poetry i admire. It simple but yet at the same time complex. Well written. I look forward to reading more
5/5

Wow what a great poem