A Very Sad Poem

by Tisha   Feb 24, 2006


She was ready to start her life over as they moved to a new town
She wanted to make things better to turn her life around
No more staying out late
No more having her parents worrying staying up half the night ,irate
She had all new stuff for in her room
Surely she'd make some new friends soon
She was starting at a new school in a few days
This young girl out of control was ready to change her ways
Weeks past by and she made some new friends and
wanted to stay the night
Her parents didn't want her to stay but finally said all right
She was staying friday night everything was arranged
This was her one chance to prove to them that she had changed
There was more people there then she had thought
When she realized they was drinking ,she knew that she
would get caught
So she called her Mom and Dad to come and pick her up
But they wasn't home and she got the machine,This boy
offered to take her home,he said he only had a few cups
As they hopped in the car he pushed on the gas
Every car in his way he began to pass
My Mom and Dad was right I should have never came
She was trying to change her life ,she didn't want them to
know that her night had turned out just the same
All that she saw was a bright flash
Then the impact came as the cars crashed
They are not going to make it is what she heard
Trying to speak back to them she could not say a word
She wondered if the people in the other car was alright
She wished many times that she would have just stayed
home tonight
She heard the nurses say we lost the boy we did all that
we can do
And I am sorry to say that we are loosing the young girl too
It couldn't be true ,they had to of lied
The other people in the 2nd car could not of died
I hope that Mom and Dad know how much I love them
tonight
As she passed away they wasn't there to hold her tight
You see this story is so very sad
Because the people that died in the other car was her Mom
and Dad

©Tisha

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  • 17 years ago

    by ALEXIS

    This poem is sooo amazing!
    i cant imagine what this situation would ever be like, but ur description of it gave me shivers and reduced me to tears- thankyou i loved every line! al.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was very very good! i lovedd itt! it was so sad.. but at least they all died together.. it would have been awful if lik only one survived.. neways, there were just a few grammar mistakes..keep up the good work!
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic job, keep them coming take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    There are a lot of poems ive heard like this so i cant really say its like, different, but the way that you wrote it was sensitive and you dealt with the issues in a way that gave them justice. My friend was killed because of a drunk driver and ithink you handled it well xx

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohhh =(

    This poem gave me chills and it brought a tear to my eye...its so tragic. The sad thing is, that this stuff really happens...ugh. Keep up the beautiful writing hun