by Darren Feb 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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It flew in to say a last goodbye |
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Wow loved this poem. . . I dont know why asactly but that last stanza caught my attention. . . |
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I loved this poem and thought it was beautifully written. I did have one question - did you mean "last" or "lost" in the first line? Lost works, but I get the feeling you meant last. Otherwise, I truly enjoyed. :) |
by sarah
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I really liked your poem take care sarah x |