So scared

by Kurt   Feb 25, 2006


Black surrounds me
It's night not day
I'm pretty sure
I'm not okay

Death follows
Where ever i go
It's my turn soon
That i know

The light shines ever dimmer
I retreat farther back
My gold heart
Is fading to black

Terror builds behind me
Courage begins to fail
Blood leaves my cheeks
Turning my skin pale

I'm a coward
In the face of my sins
And this must be
How my Hell begins

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Yet another great poem... def 5/5 take care sarah.

  • 18 years ago

    by beth

    OMG YOUR REALLY REALLY GOOD at writing poetry! :):):):):):):):) u should like autograph a poem send me it.. cause one day u could be famous! Anywayz I give it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by iDeePanda

    Thanx so much for ur supportt...this poem..damn,,it was EXTRA good 4 short words

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice. fantasticly written and a brilliant ending.

    however, this line "And i turn pale
    " somehow doesn't seem to fit in with the overall flow of the poem, it disrupts it slightly, nothing that isn't recovered again almost instantly so it is not a major flaw but it is therre.

    overall 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Omg great poem hun!!!
    ive been waiting for you to put more on!!!
    hope your ok and thanx for the comments!!!
    love jess XxXxXxXxXxX

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