The Melody Sinks Deep Within

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Feb 27, 2006


The song's lyrics sink deep into my skin.
I feel the music, I feel its rythmn.
The artist's voice cries out to me, pleading.

Stuck in his world, he's barely holding on.
He sings about losing his mind.
He sings about slowly losing grip.

As the sad melody slowly fades,
Another artist's energy
Blasts through my speakers.

A whole different world opens up.
Happiness, joy, love.
A whole new perspective of life.

Its melody sinks deep into your skin.
The artist's pain, the artist's happiness,
All is translated into his music.
Music is poetry.

*i was listening to "last resort" by papa roach and "no one like you" by scorpions... very different in mood and styles lol

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  • 18 years ago

    by Krystle

    I adore the simplicity of your verses, and the raw feel of this poem. The songs actually started playng in my head while I read this -- that's a neat trick, lol. Toutefois, c'est une poème très passionante et vivide. Brava!

    Cheers, Krystle

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Excellent Job and Very True...and please if you comment my work dont comment on this account..i have another account.where i have over 124 poems..lol i got the same poetry awards as you..2 gold and 2 silver..
    ♪♥Torn Pieces of my Heart♥♪
    Thats my name..so if you comment me please do so on that account..i only use this account for a certain club
    Great Job on this poem..and i like that song from Papa Roach.:-D
    Great job once again
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    I have never herd them but maybe i should now if they inspire u so well xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    I like how you've managed to convey how the music affected you and a sort of connection to how the artist felt. It really came out well and you did a great job.

    Jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Those two songs appear to be magical, they inspired you to write a true masterpiece. Well done! I liked the use of imagery in this poem. Bravo!

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