I Need To Know

by Cuddles   Feb 27, 2006


Can't you see it in my eyes?
Can't you read it on my face?
There are things I want to tell you.
There are words I can't seem to say.

Don't you see it in my smile?
Don't you hear it in my voice?
The way I feel about you is crazy,
but life isn't giving me a choice.

I love you so much that it hurts.
It's been killing me not to say that.
I can't keep quiet anymore.
I just need to know if you love me back.

My heart says that you do.
My mind is taking longer to be sure.
Your signals are so mixed that I can't tell.
Please tell me, for this uncertainty my soul can't endure.

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Vwey nicely done, enjoyed the flow, superb job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This is really beautiful! might sound great as a song!

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    KUDOS BABE THANKS FOR THE COMMENT I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS WRITTEN PERFECTLY ALOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Good job love. nicely written. it was passionate and happy, but at the same time it seemed quite sad and lonely. well good work once again!

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem 'A fight within'

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    I understand were ur coming from good poem i love the wording in ur last line xox sam