Promise Me.

by Luke   Feb 27, 2006


Here's Another Of The New Style..

Do you think about me baby?
'Coz I always think of you..
I Think about me loving..
And you loving me too..

Have I got high hopes..
Do I have a chance..
Will we live our dreams..
Have our own first dance?

Will you let me hold you?
All through the night?
Will you be my hero..
That one bright light?

Promise me one thing..
That you will never lie..
You shall love me always..
Never make me cry.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 27th Feb 2006

Ty Angela!!!!
:D
XoxoX

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh goodness, I've only just re-read this one....... its wonderful, it reads so much better with all the changes you made, as I said before, it has feeling and emotion and its flows beautifully.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

    you're welcome

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Not sure if you have made the changes above ^^ but it's an excellent write. Emotional and heartfelt. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey Sweetie, we discussed this one in the discussion boards. Make those few changes I suggested and it will flow much better. I love the feeling and emotion in this one. Well done.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

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