by Alexandra Jade Brewer Mar 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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As cheerful as a sunflower |
by Kaila
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Lovely job the third stanza that was amazing my absolute favorite part out of the whole poem this poem spoke to me in a way that i dont know it reminded me of all of my deceased relatives...nice work |
by HidinVictim
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This is really pretty, if you don't mind me asking did something happen to your mom...pm me ok... 5/5 oh yeah I LOVE THE FLOW!! |
by Christina
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Awwwz great poem!! |
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That was so beautiful I loved this poem cause it shows the relationship you have with your mother 5/5 |
by TracyM
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You can really feel the sadnes in this poem, especially towards the end, the word choice is good, the structure suits the poem, and overall was a pleasure to read, keep on writing. |