Life

by Melody   Jan 20, 2004


“Life”

I see her
She sits with her head in her arms as she cries in darkness
I see her
Counting the minutes as the clock ticks clicks ticks
I see her
Fading from life, never opening the door to the world
She will never know the true gift we gave her
I see her
Dead.

He came
He knew she was suffering
He knew she disregarded the world
But he couldn’t help
She never listened to his counsel
So he took what he gave her
And now she’s gone.

We know
If you don’t take the time to live
If you don’t use life to your advantage
We know
If you spend your days, withering like petals on a flower
Just because you bring upon your misfortune
We know
And we will take what we gave you back if you don’t fulfill your destiny
But how will anyone ever know if they waste it like she did?
Live life! Love and cherish it. And you’ll know what we gave you
Or you will end up like she did
Dead.

**This is kinda in the point of view of an angel saying that God took this girls life away because she didnt use it well.**

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  • 20 years ago

    by Melody

    True I dont believe God will take your life away either its just I was trying to get to my point. lol

  • 20 years ago

    by dee

    sniff...you sure get to your point! hehee and you said you weren't good..shoot, it was phenomenal!!! hehee it has made an imapact on me..and a lesson has been learned today!

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