I begged screamed and pleaded

by nadsyy   Mar 6, 2006


~ i was bored and i just wrote what was in my mind lol~

It was only your eyes i saw
behind that mask
was a man who i knew

your eyes had yellow
and then blue around it
i knew you from somewhere
i just didn't know where

you were so pushy
you were yelling for everyone to sit
the dog wouldn't shut up
you got the gun and BANG there goes our dog

i screamed
begged
pleaded for you to leave

you pointed the gun at me as you were about to shoot

i cried

daddy told you to stop
he screamed that he loved us all
as you were about to shoot me
daddy jumped in front of me
he was gone

i cried even more

you got the gun and BANG there went the kitty

you were out of control

mum tired to be brave as she jumped on you and you shot her in the head twice
i screamed
begged
pleaded for you to leave

the guy i loved came rushing in
he heard screaming he got the gun of you
but you some how you shot him down

you shot me in the knee
it ached

i lost my mum and my daddy and my younger sister and my boyfriend
you ended up shooting everyone in the family and the guy i loved but me

i begged you to shoot me for there was no reason to live
you took of the mask

i cried as i saw your face
it was my own brother
my own brother!!!
you got the gun and pointed it to your head saying"dad and mum never loved me so they deserve to die they favored you so you can deserve to live with out them"
BANG
you were gone
i didn't even get to say bye or i still love you
you laid there your eyes just staring at me

everyone was gone and now it was my turn
goodbye world

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jacintha

    Very great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow.... just wow this is wonderful it gave goossebumps like 3 times lol. and id like to say that i liked the part about the brother keeping u alive to suffer a punishment like that that was a very smart way to put it. i wouldnt have ever thought of that goodjob

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    That was great

    i agree wif every1 up above

    5/5

    lana

  • 18 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    Wow, that is weird. I have nothing to say. It's just awkawrd, but it's good. I gave it 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Datz a rilly good poem! hehe.. itz good to let out ur feelings, i think it really helps.. loll.. good job! keep writing!
    jessy