Fear

This ROCKS! A short poem, But straight to the point.
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It's wanting to cry
But not wanting to be heard
Wanting to be ok
But unable to say the words
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Loved that stanza. It was so good. Keep it up =P 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow that is really good. I love the way that you described it. I especially liked the 2nd stanza, I could definitely relate to that. You did a great job on this!

This is true-very true and very well portrayed. You right in a very matter-of-fact way and i think that's very interesting. Good Work

Sondos

I loved this poem. Great Job. It has alot of meaning aswell. I adore your work.

Short but no less powerful. I liked the imagery and ideas you toyed with here. Easy to relate to the contrasting phrases placed at juxtaposition really brought out the conflict and contrasts...Excellent...

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