Set me free

by jessie   Mar 9, 2006


A puddle beneath me trickles slow,
As I try hard to get what I need,
I might even be able to go,
As I know how I'll die after I bleed,

Never believing shards could save,
Forgetting memories by suppressing pain,
Remembering that final wave,
Wondering what I could have gained.

I feel trapped by your deepening touch,
Chained by my surrendering heart,
Dying with your powerful clutch,
Knowing how your compassion was smart,

You saw that weakness within me,
Playing your cards when the time was right,
Saying words I thought could be,
Blinding me from that gruesome sight.

The memory of pain is being drained,
Slowly I reread my final goodbyes,
Kissing my broken; yet glorious chain,
As my souls overlooked as it rises.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megan Michaud

    Hey baby, this is a really great poem....soooo sad though :( Just keep your promise...thats all i ask...je t'aime ! oxoxoxo~Love Megzi

  • 18 years ago

    by im no one

    Its a good poem, but somtimes feelings people have for you are real, though somtimes love hurts, you cant become paranoid and think they planned things all along... i really like it though, and i know their are a lot of people in this world who control others like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Aww hunn I hope you're okay...I don't know if you know who I am..lol anyway I do..:P( it's steph sherrer by the way) anyway good job-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Once again i love this poem. great job. i hope everything went fine with talking to him today...i wuv ya jess! i'm so glad you didnt leave to south carolina this year. i would of missed you so much!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wonderful! Excellent poem! Well done, nice written. Keep up the good work, lotsaa love -xxx-

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