Changes

by Mezmeryz   Mar 12, 2006


Changes always seem to hurt you
The changes come and destroy
The life that you are living thorough
No longer of pleasure and joy

You may have to leave your friends
Or die over a loved ones death
The list of sorrows never ends
Till your very last breath

All you want is to cry,
Forever and ever
All you want is to die
No matter; whatsoever

People dont see the pain in you
Dont see what you going through
They dont get how you feel
They dont know its all for real

But then there are those changes
Bringing all the merriment and cheer
All the fun at different ranges
Theres no grief or pain to fear

But I dont believe in them
And that is just my view
I wouldnt say lifes a gem
After all its put me through

When life is going smoothly
And everything seems fine
Your family is some what lovely
And your friends are just divine

You dont think about the future
And the changes in may hold
You dont think its like a creature
From its sleep it may unfold

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    A very interesting and full peom. It liked the ideas and themes behind the poem. You could still do more to make it all the more powerful but all in all a thought-provoking poem...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Loved the imagery you created with tis write. This poem was very inspirational to others witha strong message that even through changes good or bad life will always carry on...the past is the past and we must always look towards the future.
    Awesome write!

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I really love this. its just perfect content wise. and its written fabulously. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    Hey nice poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Greayt peice, well written with a good flow. the content is brilliant and consstance thoughout holding the readers interesting and clearly portraying the themes.

    5/5