I love that poem, again, nother one i can relate too.

I love this poem i can realate to this so much

Wow hun i love this! 5/5 xxx

and yes i am interested in the club =) xxx

I;d love to write another really long comment but my teacher is comming and i have dont practicaly no work wt so ever so i'll get in trouble. i love the poem its once again so heartfelt but if ur talking about ur self you shouldnt. no matter how bad it seems beleive you me there are ppl worse off and no matter wt if u go bibi now u'll never no wt would hasve happened if u had stayed, any wya this will pass by it will not last forever and however long it takes one day u'll wake up and the torture will be over. and i'd love to stay in touch, i have yahoo and hotmail. lol
mehrnoze_123@yahoo.co.uk
elnaz_amiri@msn.com
there you go you got my name aswell, elnaz or elenaz, tho it doesnt mean nothing, my name is nothing but a word that no one cares about so u no i dont mind if u carry on calling me girl or girl with no name. oh and the poem i love the angel of death idea and how he or she may be the answer to all ur problems and will take ur fears away but i hope u realise that all wrong, death is not the answer. any way im getting side traked again. love the rhyming scheme, really kwl. oh looks like i did write a long comment, soz if u dont like them? do u mind? oh no teacher, well love to chat to u soon, add me and we can comment on each others poems? gtg. take care, looking forward to seeing you.

Oooooo, i loved the poem so much i gave it a 5 btw.

I cut my wrist, blood flowing freely
Taking me slowly far from this place
Finally I am on my way to paradise
Finally I'll see my sweet angels face

That Stanza was just amazing
That whole poem was amazing
Great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

Ah, sorrowfully darkening. surely to portray the scenes of many who have looked into the face of sweet angel death. very mysterious.

Oh wow that was amazingly written
gal I totally love you poems!!!!!!!
keep it up
lov ya
Nema x0x0x0x0x

I love this poem. It's one I can relate to. I wish I could just die. The sad thing is my parents don't notice it.

Beautifully written. i can relate to it alot. as you can see from the other comments a lot of people relate to it and its a great poem. wonderful.

Sad....i hope ur alright

take care

Much luv
Noziyna

I can totally relate awesome

Wow i can really relate to this poem, keep up the good work!!

Really great poem.. i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg gurl u good n thankz fo the comment lol n its tru wat u sayin bout dem heartbreakers dey dA most sexii onez lol haha bueno got to go meli n by da way good poem 5/5 well peace oud n keep it up

-mari-

Ohh my God I am speachless, this poem was so beautiful written with such depth!! It really touched my heart...I can relate so much and I really enjoyed reading this poem...Amazing, excellent, brilliant....What more can I say...well done..

Much Love Sabrina

Ive read a some of ur poems and they are good.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

Wow. That in itself was enchanted. Tears have swelled in my eyes and few dare escape down my cheeks with such beauty written in words its a suprise I haven't weeped. I have felt that way before. Many times actually and I have had that feeling a lot and I've prayed for it to end. Hold on and keep strong and all with end in goodness. Hold onto hope because when you have nothing else, you'll always have that. --Devon.

Very well written. Although I have no intention of meeting that angel soon. :)

Your poem has been stolen.

http://thebrokenheartsclub.deviantart.com/art/Sweet-Angel-Of-Death-87904017