Just the way I feel !!! |
by Monique
Hey there, |
Second stanza: And try to keep myself war*m*..... |
Aww babe i l0ve it, i totally no how u feel, plz babe i l0ve u nd i only want u 2 b happy!! it breaks my heart 2 c u unhappy luv ur bestiie |
by PURE HEART
Awesome.......excellent.... |
Wow, perfectly written, perfect choice of words just amazing....I loved this one hunni. I know that some times the pain you feel can be too much to bare, but then you have to be strong and whenever you feel like this you can always email me sweety, I will be here for you. Hope you are feeling better??? |
by The Wingless
Heh, well, I liked this. |
Hey love, ha this poem made me tear and that doesn't happen too often. We all have our battles with the past, those of us who have a past we don't want to remember. Keep fighting. You have a strong, beautiful soul and you are strong enough to get over this. |
by Avellana
I loved the bit about re-enacting memories, because that is so what happens. Why can't we ever remeebr the good ones as well eh? |
by MaryAnnEvans
Good job on the lyrics...oh...not a song?? hmm should be... play an instrument? Music adds demension and clarity to your words..try it sometime...who knows.. someone may just want to listen. |
by RegretedPast
Great poem, i love how you make ur past seem like a demon, it's awsome, keep writting. But im hoping ur not doing any more self-destructive behaviors |
by Krystle
Eerily reminiscent of feelings I would really rather have not experienced.... brilliant nonetheless. You have captured the essence of the dark times. |
THIS IS JUST AN AMAZING POEM...AMAZING..AMAZING...AMAZING |
by ~*Layna*~
WOW...Im speachless but yet Im still trying to say something.... Words cannot describe how good this poem was. I mean it was SOOOOOOO good. Wow you got the rhymes...have u thought about song writing....I would so tune in if u did. KEEP WRITING! u are soooo good at it. HAPPY WRITING> *so long* |
by Violet
Great poem! |
Oh wow, this poem of yours left me speechless. Incredible work, thats all I can say. |
Loved the way you rhymed everything and it was just awesome! Keep it up! |
by Sarah
Oh i like your poem it is sooooo good!xoxoxsarahxoxox |
by sweet girl!
Good job on this peom i loved it |
Aww i missed your poetry so much hun! aww, im back to this site for good now hopefully lol, aw i missed reading all your work, cannot wait to get to reading some more, this poem is fantastic though woow, amazing hun, xxoo |