by Xx-BleedingSoul-xX Mar 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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You never took notice, |
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Wow babe i like the ending it was good |
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Lol...because i like sporks...if u didnt know what sporks are, they are a cross between a sppon and a fork...i like them xD |
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Overall the poem is pretty good, except this line- |
by Sammi
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I gotta say, i liked it. It flowed well and had this ting of hate to it. |
by Marissa
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I love your poem!! |