Secret

by Rican Chemistry   Mar 19, 2006


Don't tell anyone
Please I beg you
I confided in you
I told you what I knew

But now its a secret
That we must both keep
Keep it well hidden
And bury it deep

Thanks for letting me talk
For letting me speak my mind
I needed to tell someone and
I knew telling you would be fine

This little secret
Was just burning me inside
I knew I could trust you
I knew in you I could confide

Now I hope you keep it
And please don't tell anyone
Don't back stab me now
Don't start talking as soon as I'm gone

Its a secret, keep it like that
Please be the friend I know you are
Its our little secret
And it will take us far

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Great Job overall
    your rhyme was put in perfectly
    It had a very good sense of Flow
    your emotion was well put out
    Great Job Al Together
    keep up the great work
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilentTearDrops

    Well i just confided in someone who i thought was my friend. and seh def turned her back on me in some ways. i've come to realize, you cant trust anyone, only yourself. but the poem was well writen, sad in my eyes. keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentTearDrops

    Well i just confided in someone who i thought was my friend. and seh def turned her back on me in some ways. i've come to realize, you cant trust anyone, only yourself. but the poem was well writen, sad in my eyes. keep it up. 5/5

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