WaLk AwAy

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Mar 20, 2006


It seems like our time is up
i have to walk away
i promise you that for my pain
one day you will pay

its not going to be long till
you figured out what u lost
its been months and in my head
you never once crossed

i have to forget about you
and move on with my life
i have to forget about
one day being your wife

I'm not going to lie
you still are my number one
but our relationship ended
and my life has just begun

i have to walk away
like i never looked into your eyes
we were too patient and we gave it
one too many chances

i have to walk away
like i never kissed your lips
knowing that were over for good
my heart everyday still rips

i have to stay strong
because i made up my mind
i know that one day
a better guy than you i will find

one last tear will fall form my eye
knowing that this is our last good-bye
but as i put you in the past
that tear will slowly dry

* this is not a good poem and i want you guys to tell me how i can make it better*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Katelyn Boudreau

    I thought it was good
    -katie

  • 18 years ago

    by ***Living the life***

    I like it alot it's so nice I just would change chances to tries cause it rhymes and makes sense, but I really like this poem and your other poems too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    This is a great poem.... so the only thing I would change is chance to tries... it rhymes with eyes... but the rest is perfect... loved it... reminds me of... well u kno...lol 5/5

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    You sound kind of confused. You say how he never crosses your mind but how you miss him. A little bit of confusion. Other wise..good job hunn..*

  • 18 years ago

    by His Firecracker

    I think its good. it pretty much describes how i feel about my ex bf.

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