Love Compared To Death

by Tasha   Mar 22, 2006


Its like you're a dream, thats never coming true.
Its like you're a sleep, and your not coming to.
You're the cause, thats bringing me so much pain.
But still I come, in need of your help again.

When I fall...

I hear your voice, its whispering words to me.
I have no choice, it all fits so perfectly.
And each sound, catches me right away.
So I begin to realize, just what you want say.

When I breathe...

I take in all the moments that have happened.
Its like I invite, only the blackened.
Then I exhale, and all my dreams disappear.
Away happiness, welcoming the fear.

When I see...

The emptiness, which is rapidly consuming.
Taking over, my heart and hallow is resuming.
Standing alone, as cold death bits my cheek.
Falling apart, because I am just too weak.

When I taste...

The gentle occurring savor of death.
Its taking over, each of my last breathes.
Since the last, time that you actually cared.
I keep on going, I am no longer scared.

Between you and death, death wins, no compared... -

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  • 17 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Wow, I hope whoever this is dedicated to or whoever you wrote this too can't look at themselfs in the mirror in the morning because That's one hell of a poem

    Great Job
    Mia

  • 18 years ago

    by The Crow

    Sadly i dont think that was me and god this is getting to hard so whats ur display name on myspace or whats ur url and good poem i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Take in all the moments that have happened.
    Its like I invite, only the blackened.
    Then I exhale, and all my dreams disappear.
    Away happiness, welcoming the fear.

    best Best Best Stanza..I love the whole Poem But that Stanza was Just amazing and spoke to me..like none other stanza has...Amazing job
    5/5
    thanks for al the help
    ~TPOMH~