The pencil that broke my heart...

by Lady Vengeance   Mar 22, 2006


So perfect with your slender frame
And soldiers solemn stance
A wooden stick I've learnt to love
But never had a chance

The pointed, silver, greyish end
Provides me with my lead
To record the days events
And thoughts that were not said

Every time I hold you near
And think of what to draw
I know you were the right choice,
Erasers are a bore.

I groomed you with my sharpener
And left you looking neat
I'd never choose another
Coz perfections hard to beat

I thought you'd be there 'till the end
Your presence filled the gap
I should have been more careful,
Why did you have to snap??

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  • 17 years ago

    by President Dead

    That's original. I've never read a poem about a penicil before.

    It's really good, i love it. It's funny too.

    Good Poem Suz

    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Hah. This was cute. Besides the last line that made me smile, it was excellent. I liked how you described the pencil, and then came down to a tragic, but funny, ending. And now I know 'Coz' is a word. I always learn things when I do not expect it, ^.^

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Ha, I shed a tear in rememberance of your sweet pencil. It sounds as though you shared some powerful memories. lol. I recomend loss counseling and a very large chocolate bar, lol. This was a great poem, thanks for sharing it, I got a brilliant laugh from it.

    -Tainted

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥MostFlyestLittleShorty♥

    Lol dats a funny/love poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Haha. I really love this poem! I pictured it all in my head! it was really creative. It made me giggle.

    kat

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