My Friend Summer

by Darien   Mar 24, 2006


My Friend Summer

Where are you my summer days?
Still hiding in my memory bank?
Can I withdraw you for a moment?
I love looking back on old times.

The sun cast shadows as we walk,
we were lucky to catch a breeze.
Soccer fields with freshly cut grass,
and pools of clean and clear water.

Trees would blow calmly in the wind,
as we tried to climb to the top.
Our best hideouts were in the trees,
and we were always one with nature.

We felt so safe and secure here,
talking about everything we could.
You were always my best friend,
the things we did will be forever.

I hope I see you again summer,
looking forward to good old times.
I miss our secrets and sounds,
the ones no one else can hear.

I know you are on your way here,
but this is not your time to shine.
A few more months until you arrive,
I missed you, oh my summer days.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    If not for the direct references to summer in the first and last two stanzass, it could be a person you were talking about. i asume that is your aim

    a new spin on a love for summer. very well written

    Ruby

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well i hate summerrrrr...but i loved this poem, you make the reader see summer in a different aspect then i normally would!!! Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Beautiful! It was very well written. I loved all the descriptions and details. The imagery was great. I love summer too! Great job! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by *colorsofmylife*

    I love all of the details and imagery you used in this one! I think it's one everybody can relater to...great job once again!

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    I actually gave you a four on this one I just don't hink that it was as good as all of your others. It did not seem to flow as well and it did not really ryhme anywhere.

    -please don't hate me

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